FIRST ROUGH AND TUMBLE DRAFT FOR LAST ARTICLE-YARN BOMBING SAVANNAH

First rough and tumble draft:

Scurrying from front to back like busy elves, mice, bees…who scurries..yarn..cat…  With twine, plastic needles-ask star- and pre-made 9×9 crochet squares in hand, the first ever crowd sourced yarn bombing team united again for the last step of their undercover..pun on crochet?—what word??– journey.

(Need Segway into what Public Art is….

Or

Segway into what yard bombing is instead bc Public Art is so BROAD

Public art has become….

AND

History of public art in savannah

Still to BROAD

So what to Segway into to>>>>>>>.hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…………….)

****Found myself stuck here for a minute, but continued to toss the story around in my head until I found a cohesive structure)

The mission began when Jessica ….insert article I found about Jessica and the first time she saw yard bombing…..

A good quote about the first time….from Jessica here.

“I knew if I ever had the chance aI would do a yarn bombing..etc”

Then that will easily Segway into Matt’s opportunity….he asked about the space and if I wanted to use it…need direct quote….or at least info

****how did they meet????? And how did this collaboration organically thrive from?***********

Get around to Mark and it was his idea…he had the space available. Quotes from Mark about public art and what it means to him. This event and current future or past events. Any info he would like to add… Then back to Jessica and how she coordinated the event..

(this would all be intertwined)

(maybe seesaw should be at the end)..public art in general to wrap it up. I like jessica’s quote about “the idea of people getting together and creating….”…now moving it.

Facebook, etc

Then different memories I have about the first meeting…WELL

Tell of history-now friends-swapping numbers taking pix

Then the last meeting, the excitement-

Use dialog from the notes taken…no direct quotes, just overheard anticipation quips.

Then we go straight into the very first paragraph again….brining it full circle….

Meeting at 6 in the morning with doughnuts…

Rewrite first sentence……

Scurrying from front to back like busy elves, mice, bees…who scurries..yarn..cat…  With twine, plastic needles-ask star- and pre-made 9×9 crochet squares in hand, the first ever crowd sourced yarn bombing team united again for the last step of their undercover..pun on crochet?—what word??– journey.

Need to get Green Truck’s thoughts on the Yarn Bombing…Who is the owner? Or an employee? Customer? Who would the reader most like to hear from?

That’s what this is all about…” quote from jessica Then go into SeeSAW

He will talk about seesaw and his part in change laws in savannah concerning public art.

And then we have made full circle.

Questions for Matt:

What does he think of public art?

I know about your organization, but is there anything new or relevant you want the public to know?

Questions for Jessica:

Try to ask her NONE! ZEROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Questions for Employ?

Did you know this was happening?

If so, did you know when, level of anticipation ad then excitement about it, response from customers and if it has inspired them.

Questions for the customer?

Do you eat here often?

What do you think about the yarn?

Have you seen it before?

Does it inspire you?

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